Writing unit 7: Write an opinion essay

Changing laws:

The government plans to introduce a new law which is about introducing school on Saturday mornings in order to improve the level of education. In my view, this would have some negative consequences for the teenagers and a lot of people will complain to the government.

In the first place, I believe that it won’t work because the children will be very tired doing six school days and angry because the Saturday and the Sunday are their days for relax, to do their homework, or to stay with their family...
Furthermore I think that it will be unfair because there are more other ways to improve the level of the education and five days studying at school is enough. I have no doubt that a lot of families will have a lot of problems to bring their children at school (because they are working) if this law is introduced.

In conclusion, if the aim of the government is to improve the level of the education, it seems to me that there’s a better alternative: if they spend more hours on the subject that they want to improve during the five days of the school, the children will learn more and their education will be better.